first robbed of breath
and blinded
by a love, not intended
then caught in a whirlwind,
to be robbed of my sense of direction;
every minute with you was heaven
every minute away, I dreamt of heaven
thus you stole
my sense of time
by sneaking out and egging me to lie,
I lost all sense of right and wrong;
you said ‘I love you’ and I lost
my soul
you said ‘lets run’, I lost myself
now you’ve left, for no good reason
bereft and alone,
I’ve lost all hope
robbed of everything,
except life….
Is that good or is that not??
2 comments:
well I thought I'd say hi. When merc asked me to look up ur blog telling me u were a novice i expected to see at the most 4-5 posts. Well looking at what u have posted so far I would say that U aint no novice. Well you may have started writing but u definitely are more coherent than many who have been writing for some time.
Your poetry is superb. I do have individual questions abt every poem and will post them when i go thru them again.
I would ask u to look up my blog but looking at ur's and merc's posts i feel my blog aint upto it. so will post the link when i feel the blog is worth reading. Anyways keep up the good work. It feels good to read the work of aspiring poets who do have talent even when they might just be exploring their talent without any notion of gaining from it.
ultimate lagrangian...swapnil...thanx man for the compliments.nice to hear my work isn't that bad. it would be nice if you would let me know what the link to your blog is you know? so i could read it...i doubt very much that it is as bad as u think it is...so...let me see for my self will you?
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